After reviewing the pitch deck, I must admit I'm not a huge fan of the pixelated design. It gives off a Minecraft or gaming vibe, which doesn't seem fitting for their audience or the image they want to project. Since this presentation is their showcase to the outside world, including marketing efforts, I suggest they reconsider their appearance.
Furthermore, starting the second page with a huge disclaimer is also a turn-off. It would be better placed towards the end or in the appendix, as at this stage, hardly anyone will read it.
By the fifth slide, I found myself disengaged. It's unclear who they are, what they offer, and what problems they aim to solve, let alone how they plan to do so. The excessive text only adds to the confusion. Show Less